After viewing of my animatic i have realised a few problems the first thing that cropped up was a problem with introducing the characters correctly. At current they are placed as silhouettes in an open establishing shot, to correct this there have been suggestions as to adding a shot before the scenic landscape shot. these have been ; to add the original scene where the dog wakes the old man via farting and they come out side to get fresh air followed by the dog walk scene - the other was to have the man fixing the building and the dog brings him a lead and they go for a walk. I have chosen to go with the second option on this as at the end of the movie the gag is that the house (that is previously lopsided) is propped up and corrected by the boulder, the house repair gives the viewer a visual link to the end of the film and an opportunity to get to know the characters ( i.e. the man could be sat there with a cup of tea and a large bag of sugar or possibly lots of empty cups of tea in a tribute to the stereotype of the yorkshire builder).
The second major criticism with the animatic is the use of camera and a lack of vital shots to show the cycles to be used. this i plan to fix soon, i have a few in mind and am considering blocking them out on maya.